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Daisy Jane inspired OS poems- Open Call!!!

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So despite an aversion

I’d log in for second.

Nothing like the immersion

Years back, now,

when OS beckoned.

 

Do second and beckoned

work as a rhyme?

I really don’t think so?

What do you think?

 

Anyway, my right eye caught the top of the feed

I did the clickeroo

And started to read:

 

now you’ll see

(clear-lee)

 that I followed daisy jane’s

 capitaless

 lead.

 

Aha! A rhyming poem about OS.

Each line took me further

Wanting more, not less.

Inside I said to her, and her readers:

Hey, Hello , Hi, Bye,

and how are you

Red hot, green, or deep blue?

 

Nowhere, and in between?

I know what you mean.

But, that’s not what I meant.

My real thoughts were less eloquent.

 

 

 Add my sad caveat,

“Like you care… what I mean.”

and send  it  to the ether

When friendship rarely survives unfair weather.

 

Cyberspace,elsewhere

is the same

And there really is only one

you can blame.

 

And, at him I get all pissed.

Because despite it all-

I ain’t no atheist.

 

Whatever. These ryhmes are godawful.

 

All my love.

Ok, not all.

 

What  a waste of time,

This daisy jane inspired rhyme?!!?????


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